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Watching TV Can Lower Children's Self Esteem, Study Finds

I read this article and I like where they think they were going with it. However, I found it to be written very poorly. So naturally I decided to tell them how I felt in a comment after the article. This is what I said...

I find this article weak in its analysis of the study. Had I been willing to purchase the full text of the study I may have found the actual source more credible, but next time I'd like to see mention of how the study came to the a fore mentioned conclusions, rather than just the opinion of the author if this article.

This article makes it seem as though they are claiming that there is a causal relationship between television viewing and self-esteem, without regard to other possible confounding variables. Did they take into account the length of time the children spent watching television and how this may correlate with neglectful parenting - which probably affects self esteem more than television. Did they have historical controls in their observation to show past and present television effects? What about a control group to compare the findings to? How is it that no focus can be given to the type of programming viewed but then a statement like "Parents can help counter these negative effects by choosing programming that reflects positive values and refrains from promoting stereotypes" be made? 

Next time let's introduce some statistical back up to the conclusions stated and it will probably make this article more credible and worth considering.